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Introduction and Overview:
The pie chart compares the most important reasons for land degradation. Overall, there are three main reasons, among which over-grazing ranks first.
A wordy body paragraph:
Over-grazing is responsible for the most significant share of land degradation (35%). There is little difference between the figures for deforestation and over- cultivation, as the former contributes the second highest percentage with 30%, while the share of the latter is marginally lower (28%). The remaining 7% is accounted for by a range of other factors. (55 words)
A leaner body paragraph:
Over-grazing is responsible for the most significant share of land degradation with 35%, followed by deforestation (30%). The contribution of over-cultivation is lower than deforestation by a margin of 2%, and the remaining 7% is accounted for by a range of other factors. (43 words)
An even leaner body paragraph:
Over-grazing causes the largest share of land degradation with 35%, followed by deforestation (30%). Over-cultivation ranks third with 28%, and the remaining 7% results from other factors. (27 words)
Fill the gaps below using words from the following list.
appliances remaining account proportion for largest household
In an average English home, the of electricity, 52%, is used for heating rooms and water.
Three kitchen , namely ovens, kettles and washing machines, 18% of electricity use.
The 30% of electricity is used for lighting, televisions and radios (15%), and vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools (15%).